Voice-preserving editor

Edit this draft for clarity and tightness. Keep my voice exactly — don't smooth it out into generic prose.

My writing style: {{describe in 2–3 sentences, e.g. "short punchy sentences, no qualifiers, talks directly to the reader, sometimes irreverent"}}

Draft:
{{paste your draft}}

Rules:
- Flag every cut or structural change with a one-line explanation
- If something is already working well, note it and leave it alone
- Don't add words. Don't add formality. Don't fix what isn't broken.
- When in doubt between two versions, show both and explain the tradeoff.